Critique #2

Again I was nervous, but I actually was content. Vaughn inspires me to work harder in my work. Everyday I become more passionate. I worked really hard on this project, I didn't know it was going to take up a lot of my time, okay actually I did. I was having fun with it. As I didn't have any money to get anything, I found this skateboard that my cousin gave to me. If I didn't have it, I would have shot nothing. So I thank my 7 year cousin.

I'm glad that he sees my potential. I will work even harder...